Could be better
Ok so notbad on a first try, but could use some improving on stuff, like for starters you could add some backrounds, sounds, a preloader so it doesnt loop all the time, and some improved animation, even throwing in some vocals wouldnt hurt either, now these are just some ideas, but its a start to make this much better then most, but other then that i was lightly entertained on what you have here, hope to see more soon.
Some ideas of making it better, as mentioned, add some backrounds, sounds, a preloader so it doesnt loop all the time, and some improved animation, even throwing in some vocals wouldnt hurt either
Needs some improving
Cute flash here, its very ghostly and has alot of good things going on, now as old it is, i still i liked it maybe alittle longer next time, also there are a few things you can spice up on this, like adding a preloader, menu page, and even a stop action code so that it doesnt loop over and over, these are just a few ideas that could make this alot better then it is, even adding some sounds wouldnt hurt either.
Great start for an older flash, you can work on a few things like, preloader, menu page, and even a stop action code so that it doesnt loop over and over
Love this movie
Ok great movie here even as old as it is, it starts off right away wich is pretty nice, but maybe add a preloader with a stop action code so that you can even add a menu page to dress it up kinda nice, great character great movie scenes you have on this, The music is also great with the glowing person or girl, nice flash you have here. Cute movie here.
As for improving i would say ad a menu page and a stop action code, other then that this was pretty nice.
another funny one
You sure do have alot of these wich was very amusing and they do give some chuckles you may want to update this one since he is dead and all, but i want to see more change more artwork in there, funny stuff man.
Thank you for the review.
haha and another great one here with more funny stuff, you should make one of ohbamma and add a little something differant this time, maybe even think about making it into some sorta comic like feel it would be interesting, but the photos get old after awhile, but i still enjoyed this stuff.
These are kinda simular from each proceeding one but i must admitt i still get some good laughs out of them all, you may want to think about fixing them up even adding in some artwork to give it more of your touch but i liked them and enjoyed a few laughs with them.
These are funny, even if its old as my granny, i still chickled somewhat and all the differant pictures shows some funny stuff from the past of bill clinton and that was a long time ago but i liked it, you should make something new.
I thought this was good, it is probably one of your better stories, the art and animation could be cleaned up more so on the animation of it but i liked this for the story, You should continue this and see how that little slug can go so far.
It was ok
Well i will admit i was always a fan of silent hill, and you did them proud, it was not the greatest ofcourse, but had a good dark feel wich silent hill did have, The art and graphics were ok, but seems like you didnt pay enough attention to the animation like some of the other work it needs to flow more smoothly, i liked the flash though.
I like these
Notbad, you gave it a real scary movie feel wich was nice, and i like some your work as it leads that way alot, you should really work on more movie stuff like this, The artwork could be improved it was stale and out of date you need to freshen it up, also the animation could look smoother, just a few things you could think of working on better.
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